Wednesday 3 October 2012

Tutorial 2 : Causes of motor vehicle accidents





Thesis statements:

  • There are several causes of motor vehicle accident to occur. Firstly, the driver drives under the influence of drugs. Secondly, motor vehicle accidents tend to occurs with the reckless driving habits of the drivers. Thirdly, distracted drivers were also one of the causes of motor vehicle accidents to occur.


three topic sentences:

  1. Drives under the influence of drugs can leads to motor vehicle accident because drugs will lessen the brain’s ability to function well and make the drivers loss complete control of their body which can lead to accident.
  2. Besides that, Reckless drivers who speed, change lanes too quickly or tailgate also one of the causes that will lead to accident.
  3. Moreover, a distracted driver, who talking on a cell phone, sending a text message or even eating food while driving may cause accident to occur.


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