Example of Student's Essay
The overall story was good. He/she got her own ideas. The organisation of ideas was good. The student also know how to expand his/her story but if the student used the WH-questions, he/she might expand his/her writing better. The student also got some problem with spelling. He/She also does the ' direct translation from the mother-language' thing. For the overall essay, I would give him/her 11/20.
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